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Needs Some Work

Pros:
1.) The concept wasn't bad. It could use a little work, though.
2.) The song was amusing.

Cons:
1.) Your artwork was...not that great. Try animating a bit more...and by animating I don't mean simply moving a picture of a missile across the screen.
2.) It was a bit short...and repeated. That's a small problem, but nevertheless, it'd be great if it was fixed.

Advice:
Fix up your artwork a bit, and make the submission a bit longer.

Foreverkul responds:

Constructive critique is good, but not that useful on a non-serious flash. Thanks.

Great

Pros:
1.) Great animation. What else can I say? It needs no work.
2.) Great sound quality. The voices were done well, and the music at the beginning was great.

Cons:
1.) The humor was...ok. It could've been better. I got a little bored with this towards the end.

Advice:
Your animation and sound was great. You really don't need to fix much at all with this...just try and make it a bit more exciting.

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