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[Kim's Nuke Fails]

Needs Some Work

Pros:
1.) The concept wasn't bad. It could use a little work, though.
2.) The song was amusing.

Cons:
1.) Your artwork was...not that great. Try animating a bit more...and by animating I don't mean simply moving a picture of a missile across the screen.
2.) It was a bit short...and repeated. That's a small problem, but nevertheless, it'd be great if it was fixed.

Advice:
Fix up your artwork a bit, and make the submission a bit longer.

Foreverkul responds:

Constructive critique is good, but not that useful on a non-serious flash. Thanks.

[Fantastic 4 - Doomsday]

Great

Pros:
1.) Great animation. What else can I say? It needs no work.
2.) Great sound quality. The voices were done well, and the music at the beginning was great.

Cons:
1.) The humor was...ok. It could've been better. I got a little bored with this towards the end.

Advice:
Your animation and sound was great. You really don't need to fix much at all with this...just try and make it a bit more exciting.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 34]

This was stupid.

The music was ok...but the rest of this was just stupid. It had no point, nor any animation aside from the intro. By the title, I thought this would be at least remotely funny, but I was wrong. Work on animating, and actually submitting something other than Hitler standing.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

If only all the people that don't like these would write reviews like this...

[Mario forgot how to Jump!]

Good

Pros:
1.) This was simply put...hilarious. It started to get a bit boring...but it immdediatly got better when he lit himself on fire. Great work.
2.) Nice job with sprites. I know they can be a bit of a hassle sometimes.

Cons:
1.) A little too short. Make it a bit longer with more mishaps. That'd be great.

Advice:
Really, all I'd consider changing is making it longer. Everything else was good. Nice job.

[Youso]

Good

Pros:
1.) Very good animation. Nice and smooth, I like it.
2.) Good sound quality. Another feature that made this one of my favorite submissions of the day.

Cons:
1.) Rather...pointless. It had no story. You did everything else well...now put it all together through some sort of plot.

Advice:
You've got the right stuff. Keep it up...I want to see more in the near future.